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Crown fit for MY King

 Caricata il 23 Lug, 2008
da proudmommy

Crown fit for MY King
looking for constructive feedback on this shot as well as soda can shot.... how could I get more detail in the ice/water... how's the DoF? Ya know, anything you can give.. as long as it's CONSTRUCTIVE, of course :O

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arm92aj77

1 anno, 5 mesi ago:

you did a nice job, I like how you can see the moisture on the outside of the glass

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Wolfman-K

1 anno, 5 mesi ago:

I like it as is as well. If youwant to try something different with it, try some color monochrome processing.

There is a lot of grey that might change the tone of the image if it changed color.. I'm thinking something in the red or maybe yellow range. Just an idea for something to experiment with, if you want it.

proudmommy

1 anno, 5 mesi ago:

Good idea... I've never tried monochrome processing... it will be a new experience! Thanks! ;)

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peterderooij

1 anno, 5 mesi ago:

Like the DoF. The cans are a bit dark to my taste (or for my monitor), prefer this one. For more detail in the ice I can only guess -- some backlighting, or just more / stronger lighting? Finally, one thing that would either improve this one, or make it boring: take the dark thing in the background out, or move it. Doesn't bother me, but I did notice it.

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proudmommy

1 anno, 5 mesi ago:

THANKS! Backlighting... yeah! It did feel dark to me as well... the black in the background is a change from an exterior wall to the opening in a door... I could have moved over to the right a bit. Didn't think about that.. I will remember to pay more attention to the background! I really do appreciate specific feedback.

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